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PostPosted: Tue Feb 09, 2010 3:04 pm 
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My hats off to you, great story.
I look forward to the next one that comes out.

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 09, 2010 3:08 pm 
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So amazing, I can't even begin to fathom how you write these stories. This gets a 5/5 for awesomeness!!

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I was kinda wondering how you would wrap this one up, but I am impressed.
Nicely done man.
Now get to work on the next one. :lol:

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Great story Pony. When you said that Ghost wasn't Bradforfd I thought you were going to do a tie in with one of your other stories as to who Ghost was. Glad you didn't take some cheesy way out by killing off Ghost towards the end once she found out (assumbly by Agualiar or old dude in the bar). Nice work and look forward to whatever future story you write.


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PostPosted: Tue Feb 09, 2010 8:09 pm 
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Oh, as far as MOAR goes, the title "John Webley" comes to mind. :D

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Wrecking Ball wrote:
Oh, as far as MOAR goes, the title "John Webley" comes to mind. :D



That's the story I was thinking of when he said that Ghost isn't Brad. I thought he was going to tie the two stories together. John Webley reminds me of Ghost though without the cammo. Just in the way he moves, talks, and reacts. Figured it would be a tie-in down the road.


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Yay happy ending!! :D

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exellent story again

You have a real talent for zombie stories, Im looking forward to your next one, now onto The John Webley story.


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good job on the story :!:

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Well done indeed .............. and when do you think "that another story" m i g h t evolve? Hmmmmmmmm?? :lol: :lol:


But seriously, an evocative and solid piece of work. :D


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Great story once again

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Now I have to wait for you to start another one.

Good job on this one.

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Nooo! this can´t be over now! :(


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So Ponyboy.........I'm feeling another story. :D :D :D

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Thank you for the story. It was a very plausible scenario and well written.
Looking foward to your next one. Tri


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Good strory but toooooo long. It take too much of time in reading but worth it. I would like to request you to next time meke it bit sort as my slate also refuse to show that big story in once... :)

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aliahlewis wrote:
Good strory but toooooo long. It take too much of time in reading but worth it. I would like to request you to next time meke it bit sort as my slate also refuse to show that big story in once... :)

There is no such thing as too much story!

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Too long? What's next?

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I finally got the chance to read this one. Equally as good as Two for the Road.

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Again, once I started, couldn't stop. Sorry if this is a necro, but I just learned how good the Art section can be.


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tagged to reread

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I thought I had commented on this, but I don't see where I did. So, I wanted to let you know this is an AWESOME story, start to finish. Detailed, intricate characterizations, long and detailed story line, just an awesome read.

I think this is easily your second best story. Would make a great movie, too.

Nice work.

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Hummm, I believe this was about the best story I've read in here so far, really enjoyed it, THANKS for writting and sharing it .
I believe I'll go look for MOAR stories by you.


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