The Woman and the Ghost

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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by Scott in AK » Tue Feb 09, 2010 3:04 pm

Ponyboy
My hats off to you, great story.
I look forward to the next one that comes out.
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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by Wrecking Ball » Tue Feb 09, 2010 3:08 pm

So amazing, I can't even begin to fathom how you write these stories. This gets a 5/5 for awesomeness!!
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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by SimonZayne » Tue Feb 09, 2010 4:56 pm

I was kinda wondering how you would wrap this one up, but I am impressed.
Nicely done man.
Now get to work on the next one. :lol:
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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by wyecoyte » Tue Feb 09, 2010 7:53 pm

Great story Pony. When you said that Ghost wasn't Bradforfd I thought you were going to do a tie in with one of your other stories as to who Ghost was. Glad you didn't take some cheesy way out by killing off Ghost towards the end once she found out (assumbly by Agualiar or old dude in the bar). Nice work and look forward to whatever future story you write.

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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by Wrecking Ball » Tue Feb 09, 2010 8:09 pm

Oh, as far as MOAR goes, the title "John Webley" comes to mind. :D
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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by Swoop411 » Tue Feb 09, 2010 9:31 pm

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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by wyecoyte » Tue Feb 09, 2010 10:55 pm

Wrecking Ball wrote:Oh, as far as MOAR goes, the title "John Webley" comes to mind. :D

That's the story I was thinking of when he said that Ghost isn't Brad. I thought he was going to tie the two stories together. John Webley reminds me of Ghost though without the cammo. Just in the way he moves, talks, and reacts. Figured it would be a tie-in down the road.

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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by Samurai Penguin » Wed Feb 10, 2010 3:43 am

Yay happy ending!! :D
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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by Bun-G » Wed Feb 10, 2010 9:37 am

exellent story again

You have a real talent for zombie stories, Im looking forward to your next one, now onto The John Webley story.

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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by SteveD » Wed Feb 10, 2010 1:12 pm

good job on the story :!:
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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by Pearl » Wed Feb 10, 2010 9:18 pm

Well done indeed .............. and when do you think "that another story" m i g h t evolve? Hmmmmmmmm?? :lol: :lol:


But seriously, an evocative and solid piece of work. :D

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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by eazy » Thu Feb 11, 2010 2:05 pm

Great story once again
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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by Yeti » Fri Feb 12, 2010 12:42 pm

Now I have to wait for you to start another one.

Good job on this one.
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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by FrANkNstEin » Sat Feb 13, 2010 4:29 am

Nooo! this can´t be over now! :(

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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by Wrecking Ball » Sat Feb 13, 2010 4:57 pm

So Ponyboy.........I'm feeling another story. :D :D :D
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Finch wrote:i don't keep sharp things near me when my wiener is out of my pants
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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by Trident » Sat Feb 13, 2010 7:25 pm

Thank you for the story. It was a very plausible scenario and well written.
Looking foward to your next one. Tri

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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by aliahlewis » Fri Mar 26, 2010 4:31 am

Good strory but toooooo long. It take too much of time in reading but worth it. I would like to request you to next time meke it bit sort as my slate also refuse to show that big story in once... :)

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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by nateted4 » Fri Mar 26, 2010 3:52 pm

aliahlewis wrote:Good strory but toooooo long. It take too much of time in reading but worth it. I would like to request you to next time meke it bit sort as my slate also refuse to show that big story in once... :)
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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by Cascade Failure » Fri Mar 26, 2010 4:35 pm

Too long? What's next?

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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by Bearcat » Fri Jun 25, 2010 8:47 pm

I finally got the chance to read this one. Equally as good as Two for the Road.
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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by WhoShotJR » Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:59 pm

Again, once I started, couldn't stop. Sorry if this is a necro, but I just learned how good the Art section can be.

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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by SteveD » Tue Mar 13, 2012 3:01 pm

tagged to reread
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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by bad_karma00 » Fri Mar 30, 2012 8:23 pm

I thought I had commented on this, but I don't see where I did. So, I wanted to let you know this is an AWESOME story, start to finish. Detailed, intricate characterizations, long and detailed story line, just an awesome read.

I think this is easily your second best story. Would make a great movie, too.

Nice work.
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Re: The Woman and the Ghost

Post by deathstalkertwo » Thu Apr 26, 2012 2:05 pm

Hummm, I believe this was about the best story I've read in here so far, really enjoyed it, THANKS for writting and sharing it .
I believe I'll go look for MOAR stories by you.

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