Death of Conscience...a Zompocalypse Story of Lonliness

Zombie or Post Apocalyptic themed fiction/stories.

Moderator: ZS Global Moderators

User avatar
Wrecking Ball
* * *
Posts: 348
Joined: Wed Dec 17, 2008 10:29 pm
Favorite Zombie Movies: Shaun of the Dead, Resident Evil: Apocalypse, Dawn of the Dead.

Re: Death of Conscience...a Zompocalypse Story of Lonliness

Post by Wrecking Ball » Wed Jul 15, 2009 1:17 am

I should've gone to sleep an hour ago, but I had to stay up to read this (yes, I'm a slow reader) I'm glad to actually read a full story in one go. If you write another, which I hope you do, I will be right there to read it 8)
Finch wrote:i sometimes hope zombies come so i dont have to go to work
Finch wrote:i don't keep sharp things near me when my wiener is out of my pants
-Finch, you are a funny man.

User avatar
pds84
* * *
Posts: 345
Joined: Thu Jun 21, 2007 2:09 pm
Favorite Zombie Movies: Return of the Living Dead, Romero Trilogy, Dead Alive!, 28 Days Later
Location: Dayton, OH

Re: Death of Conscience...a Zompocalypse Story of Lonliness

Post by pds84 » Mon Jul 20, 2009 12:14 pm

Very well done, man - I like how you focused on a specific period, instead of dealing with the grandiosity of the entire ZPAW. Made the story's passage much more real for me, and didn't get lost in the enormity of 'forever' as some of the zombie fic does that I read.

And being a nerd, totally enjoyed the ending - gives the rest of us hope, eh? Apparently I just need the world to end now so that I can save a hot girl and end up being happy for the rest of my life. :lol:
It's a trap!!!!

prebans wrote: "So where are they taking Bob?"

"County Mental for observation. And pants."

User avatar
jrossetti
*
Posts: 80
Joined: Fri Jan 02, 2009 11:50 am
Favorite Zombie Movies: Zombie Movie: 28 Days Later
PAW Movies: The Omega Man, Panic in Year Zero!
Location: Utah, USA
Contact:

Re: Death of Conscience...a Zompocalypse Story of Lonliness

Post by jrossetti » Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:04 pm

Great story. I know there's quite a few of us in ZS that can all-too-easily identify with the main character. Well written, well paced, and a good ending. Like pds84, I like that you focused more on a specific series of events, makes it easier to connect with the story and characters.

Write more, and share!

User avatar
eazy
* * *
Posts: 794
Joined: Thu Jan 29, 2009 10:34 pm
Favorite Zombie Movies: Shaun of the dead,Dawn of the dead.28 days later,28 weeks later all n.o.t.l.d movies,Land of the dead and I'm sure there are more i can't remember right now.
Location: Warrensburg,Missery but that much closer to Kansas

Re: Death of Conscience...a Zompocalypse Story of Lonliness

Post by eazy » Wed Dec 16, 2009 7:23 pm

Tagged for excellence! :D
bonanacrom wrote:When I bite into a York Peppermint Pattie, I get the sensation of the life draining out of a man's body as I crush his windpipe, silencing forever his irritatingly cheerful banter, when all I wanted was to pay for my coffee and leave. Get the sensation.
TravisM.1 wrote:I'm not squeamish about much, but I don't fuck with poop.

User avatar
trevor3433
* *
Posts: 260
Joined: Sat Jun 06, 2009 4:51 am
Favorite Zombie Movies: 28 Days Later, Resident Evil: Degeneration, Fido, Diary of the Dead [2008], Shaun of the Dead, Dead Snow, Land of the Dead, Dawn of the Dead [2004], Night of the Living Dead [1990], I Am Legend, etc.
Location: ABQ, NM. The land of entrapment.

Re: Death of Conscience...a Zompocalypse Story of Lonliness

Post by trevor3433 » Thu Dec 17, 2009 11:06 pm

Image
:lol: And Tagged!
You, you, and you: Panic. The rest of you, follow me.
"Stay Vigilant, Stay Quiet, Stay Alive" - JL Bourne

User avatar
airmandan
ZS Member
ZS Member
Posts: 109
Joined: Tue May 04, 2010 10:45 am
Location: somewhere in the sands of Afghanistan

Death of Conscience...a Zompocalypse Story of Lonliness

Post by airmandan » Sun Jan 29, 2012 8:58 am

Bump for an awesome story

Laager
* * * *
Posts: 840
Joined: Sun Jun 20, 2010 9:25 pm

Re: Death of Conscience...a Zompocalypse Story of Lonliness

Post by Laager » Sun Jan 29, 2012 5:11 pm

Interesting story line, I have to admit that my first thought was that there was no way they could keep Will from leaving, other than to lock him up and put a guard on him 24/7 if he was really set in leaving.
“Complacency kills. Paranoia is the reason I’m still alive.” If we do happen to make contact, I expect nothing less than gratuitous violence from the lot of ya.

deathstalkertwo
* *
Posts: 131
Joined: Thu Dec 23, 2010 2:28 pm

Re: Death of Conscience...a Zompocalypse Story of Lonliness

Post by deathstalkertwo » Thu Apr 26, 2012 7:02 pm

Pretty damn good story. Thanks for sharing, and glad you didn't delete it.

Shellyann36
* *
Posts: 146
Joined: Thu Jan 15, 2009 4:58 pm

Re: Death of Conscience...a Zompocalypse Story of Lonliness

Post by Shellyann36 » Thu Sep 27, 2012 11:00 pm

Glad I found it!
Wife to Keith, Mom to Michael (22) David (21) & Anthony (18) Lil Keith (2), Adam & Elijah (8 months)

Griffworks
* *
Posts: 143
Joined: Sat Apr 28, 2012 1:57 am
Favorite Zombie Movies: Romero Dead Movies, Shaun of the Dead
Location: Central Arkansas
Contact:

Re: Death of Conscience...a Zompocalypse Story of Lonliness

Post by Griffworks » Sun Sep 30, 2012 9:43 am

Yes, excellent story! Thanks for not deleting it.
"Zombies. Man, they freak me out."

User avatar
Ike
* * *
Posts: 549
Joined: Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:17 pm

Death of Conscience...a Zompocalypse Story of Lonliness

Post by Ike » Tue Oct 09, 2012 11:43 pm

Awesome pony boy!

bad_karma00
*
Posts: 82
Joined: Sat Nov 20, 2010 8:57 pm

Re: Death of Conscience...a Zompocalypse Story of Lonliness

Post by bad_karma00 » Fri Oct 26, 2012 8:49 pm

You really are a first rate story teller PB.

Bad
"Pain is scary."
http://badkarma00.wordpress.com/
SO SAY WE ALL

Azraelsjudgement
* *
Posts: 112
Joined: Thu Mar 21, 2013 10:27 am
Favorite Zombie Movies: Least Favorite would be a shorter list

Re: Death of Conscience...a Zompocalypse Story of Lonliness

Post by Azraelsjudgement » Fri Apr 12, 2013 11:43 am

Had to find this after reading the Twelve great emotional story arc.
"My zombies will never take over the world because I need the humans. The humans are the ones I dislike the most, and they're where the trouble really lies." - George A. Romero

User avatar
D_Man
*
Posts: 66
Joined: Fri Jan 30, 2015 12:58 pm
Location: Southern Maine

Re: Death of Conscience...a Zompocalypse Story of Lonliness

Post by D_Man » Fri Jun 26, 2015 3:19 pm

Thanks for a great read.
To strive,
To seek,
To find, But not to yield.
~Tennyson

dogmanan
Posts: 14
Joined: Tue Oct 16, 2018 9:02 pm

Re: Death of Conscience...a Zompocalypse Story of Lonliness

Post by dogmanan » Sat Dec 29, 2018 4:54 pm

THANK YOU

very good read.

Post Reply

Return to “Fiction”