Cole; More on a Story

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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by Makarov » Tue Jan 13, 2009 4:10 pm

Good writing Doc. I hate that you ended the story, but I like how you set it up for a possible continue.

I think that you made a good choice by separating the "complete story"(you need a catchy name for your universe...) themes into 3 separate books(hopefully, fingers crossed), Hannah being the first day survivor story, Owen being the action story and Cole being the rebuilding story.

Again, great work, but don't let the tributes keep you away from the keyboard. More writing please. :wink:
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by Ronin71XS » Tue Jan 13, 2009 7:53 pm

Yep, Doc's THE MAN! :roll:
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by tenhigh » Wed Jan 14, 2009 2:49 pm

Yeah doc, thanks for all of the great stories, They've always been just awesome, truly awesome.

But now where will I get my doc66 cliffhanger fix? :lol:

Maybe I'll go back and start the series over again too. :wink:
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by Resolute » Sat Jan 17, 2009 10:42 am

Hey doc! Long time lurker, and finally first time poster after registering. Thanks for your stories - I have enjoyed reading all of them. I wish you luck in getting them published - finding a company who will pick up your ideas can be hard for any author. I can't wait to see them in print!

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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by doc66 » Sat Jan 17, 2009 7:10 pm

I've got an idea for another story involving one of the characters from the Lodge that was given to me by a guy, but I need a break. So give me a few weeks. We'll see what happens.
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by Snapshot7.62 » Mon Jan 19, 2009 5:02 pm

WOW! Great story doc, i was hoping this wouldn't end, but all great things must. I do hope you do another continuation of the story, your writing is some of the best that i have read in a long time, also good luck on getting these published. If you do, you can count on me to buy the set!
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by Vegas Hitman » Wed Jan 21, 2009 5:33 pm

doc66 wrote:Thank you.

Now go forth and read Owen!

Oh and the short story, 36 Hours kinda is the kick off for the whole series.

I'll find the link for it for you.....

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I have gone forth and read all that there is to read in this series(so far). It all kicked ass. I hope someday that you might decide to continue this series. Like all great writers, storytellers, artists, and strippers, you Sir, have left me wanting. It pains me that I might forever wonder what happened to the survivors at the Lodge. So many questions.

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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by spchtr » Fri Feb 06, 2009 7:53 pm

A great action filled series, I would love to see this one continue on.
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by Morphace » Thu Mar 05, 2009 12:05 pm

Just finished read all of the stories in this series and I have to say they are awesome. Doc, your the man. I hate that it's over, but it was such a good read.
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by doc66 » Thu Mar 05, 2009 1:03 pm

Thanks. I really enjoyed writing them, there was so much more I wanted to put into them-- more about how the Lodge works-- more about how they were surviving, but with character driven stories, it's hard for me to put in those details. I have a notebook on all of the changes to the Lodge they made in the interim, defenses, gardens, where they had the cattle penned, many many things that did not make it into the storyline.

I've been thinking about a spin off and a story about the lodge itself from a totally different character's point of view, one who migh tnot even have been introduced in the other stories, but I'm kind of in a holding pattern right now. I'm just not sure where I want it to go yet.

Thanks again though. I'm glad you enjoyed them. I really like the characters and Hannah especially. Her being pregnant was a total shock to me, and I had to change a couple of the things I was planning. Characters can do that to you sometimes!
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by Tetra Grammaton Cleric » Thu Mar 05, 2009 8:09 pm

Doc, just wanted to say thanks again for the best zombie fiction not yet in print (and arguably equal to or greater than the best zombie fiction in print).

I love your dystopian vistas with the touches of Romero. Dystopian vistas populated by very human and very compelling characters.
Even a superhero like Owen is as believable as any guy next door.

So thanks. 8)
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by Jaystoke » Fri Apr 17, 2009 11:03 am

Where do i go to start this trilogy?

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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by eazy » Fri Apr 17, 2009 11:31 am

start here
http://zombiehunters.org/forum/viewtopi ... 28&t=14938" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
http://www.zombiehunters.org/forum/view ... 28&t=22556" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
http://www.zombiehunters.org/forum/view ... 28&t=20354" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
http://www.zombiehunters.org/forum/view ... 28&t=14726" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
http://www.zombiehunters.org/forum/view ... 28&t=42437" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by Shorty0969 » Fri Apr 17, 2009 11:43 am

eazy wrote:start here
http://zombiehunters.org/forum/viewtopi ... 28&t=14938" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
http://www.zombiehunters.org/forum/view ... 28&t=22556" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
http://www.zombiehunters.org/forum/view ... 28&t=20354" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
http://www.zombiehunters.org/forum/view ... 28&t=14726" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
http://www.zombiehunters.org/forum/view ... 28&t=42437" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
Close, but Owen is before Cole, so switch the third and fourth links.
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by Kathy in FL » Fri Apr 17, 2009 11:46 am

Hi Shorty ... hope Doc66 hasn't fried his brain too much and remembers that sleep is necessary to the human condition. :wink:
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eazy wrote:start here
http://zombiehunters.org/forum/viewtopi ... 28&t=14938" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
http://www.zombiehunters.org/forum/view ... 28&t=22556" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
http://www.zombiehunters.org/forum/view ... 28&t=20354" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
http://www.zombiehunters.org/forum/view ... 28&t=14726" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
http://www.zombiehunters.org/forum/view ... 28&t=42437" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
Close, but Owen is before Cole, so switch the third and fourth links.

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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by eazy » Fri Apr 17, 2009 12:00 pm

Sorry bout that :oops: I guess I have my bookmarks mixed up :oops:
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by Shorty0969 » Fri Apr 17, 2009 12:09 pm

eazy wrote:Sorry bout that :oops: I guess I have my bookmarks mixed up :oops:
No worries, you did all the hard work and collected the links!

Hey Kathy, he's getting more sleep than I am...two of us in school is rough. :shock:
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by Resolute » Tue Jan 19, 2010 11:56 am

I just couldn't stand seeing this thread go idle for nine months. I had to make a post to remind Doc not to forget about this story!

And to make all you guys wish this was an update instead of someone posting for MOAR :twisted:

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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by ForgeCorvus » Tue Jan 19, 2010 3:46 pm

Bastard!! :P

You made me think there was MOAR :cry:
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by SimonZayne » Tue Jan 19, 2010 5:33 pm

Resolute wrote:I just couldn't stand seeing this thread go idle for nine months. I had to make a post to remind Doc not to forget about this story!

And to make all you guys wish this was an update instead of someone posting for MOAR :twisted:
This story is over.
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by wyecoyte » Wed Jan 20, 2010 10:27 am

Dog gone it. Posting in here is just as bad as posting in the Jesse story. Stupid people posting in here making others belive there was an update.

DOH! I did it. :mrgreen:

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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by Mr. E. Monkey » Wed Jan 20, 2010 10:46 am

wyecoyte wrote:Dog gone it. Posting in here is just as bad as posting in the Jesse story. Stupid people posting in here making others belive there was an update.

DOH! I did it. :mrgreen:
I forgive you, but only because you updated your story. :mrgreen:
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by doc66 » Tue Jan 31, 2012 8:35 am

Whew, I'm glad I posted this (all of them) here! I was going through my computer and such this morning to look for names so I could write up some Jesse, and found that somewhere along the way when changing computers I had lost a bunch of the story!
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Post by T-Boon » Tue Jan 31, 2012 9:06 am

Phew, if you need i have them all backed up on .doc for easy reading.
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