How I Joined the Militia ....

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Re: How I Joined the Militia ....

Post by teotwaki » Sat Dec 09, 2017 12:18 am

Christmas is early!
My adventures and pictures are on my blog http://suntothenorth.blogspot.com

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Re: How I Joined the Militia ....

Post by wtr100 » Tue Dec 12, 2017 11:48 am

91Eunozs wrote::clap:

Thanks! That was a fun read...really enjoyed it.

That said, two comments:

1) Satin is a really nice fabric, but not the evil overlord.

2) Angle =

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Angel =

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head hung in shame - ok not really - I write to be fun for me and some folks to read - proofreading is work
Have your musket clean as a whistle, hatchet scoured, sixty rounds powder and ball, and be ready to march at a minute's warning.

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Re: How I Joined the Militia ....

Post by KentuckyRifleman » Tue Dec 12, 2017 9:24 pm

is there anything other than kooky libertarians
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Re: How I Joined the Militia ....

Post by osagemarine » Fri Dec 15, 2017 12:38 am

Thank you! I hope you add a little more to your story!

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Re: How I Joined the Militia ....

Post by Zimmy » Sat Dec 16, 2017 6:12 pm

Thanks. I enjoyed it
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Re: How I Joined the Militia ....

Post by wtr100 » Sun Dec 17, 2017 6:15 pm

osagemarine wrote:Thank you! I hope you add a little more to your story!
thanks but this one is done I think -
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Re: How I Joined the Militia ....

Post by idahobob » Fri Dec 29, 2017 10:28 am

Done? :shock:

Crap! :vmad:

Bob
People who are rather more than six feet tall and nearly as broad across the shoulders often have uneventful journeys. People jump out at them from behind rocks then say things like, "Oh. Sorry. I thought you were someone else."

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Re: How I Joined the Militia ....

Post by wtr100 » Sat Dec 30, 2017 2:46 pm

idahobob wrote:Done? :shock:

Crap! :vmad:

Bob

Glad you liked it - not sure how much further I could go w/o getting really aweful
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Re: How I Joined the Militia ....

Post by wamba » Sat Sep 15, 2018 6:11 pm

Thanks for a fun read, better it end early than become a tangled unreadable mess.
Stopping to correct and proof read can ruin the creative flow while writing. I’d volunteer to proofread for you but I’m limited to my smartphone these days. Even with spelling errors it was enjoyable and I hope you keep writing.
Those who ignore history are doomed to repeat it, & you can bet they'll whine that nobody warned them.

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