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Re: The Lottery -- more MOAR up. 7/16

Post by Zimmy » Tue Jul 22, 2014 4:29 pm

TacAir wrote:
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Here is one vision. Not sure about the overhead bars.

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This is close to what I saw in my head but I saw it more stretched out. This is certainly a one person ride. I didn't imagine a headache rack either.
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Re: The Lottery -- more MOAR up. 7/16

Post by DAVE KI » Tue Jul 22, 2014 6:24 pm

Now that's what I'm talking about.
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Re: The Lottery -- more MOAR up. 7/16

Post by TacAir » Thu Jul 24, 2014 11:59 pm

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Rosie?


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Or this one.

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Re: The Lottery -- more MOAR up. 7/16

Post by Halfapint » Fri Jul 25, 2014 1:09 am

I love me some ratfink, and some motorcycles, but you know what I love most.....................

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Re: The Lottery -- more MOAR up. 7/16

Post by FlashDaddy » Fri Jul 25, 2014 6:07 pm

Please sir, I want MOAR!
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Re: The Lottery -- more MOAR up. 7/16

Post by FlashDaddy » Thu Jul 31, 2014 6:08 pm

For the love of the gods man, free me from this misery!

Please Tac! We need MOAR!
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Re: The Lottery -- more MOAR up. 7/16

Post by TacAir » Thu Jul 31, 2014 6:45 pm

FlashDaddy wrote:For the love of the gods man, free me from this misery!

Please Tac! We need MOAR!
Please understand my window for painting things is very narrow. This summer is the rotation for painting all of my outbuildings.

Thanks for your patience.
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Re: The Lottery -- more MOAR up. 7/16

Post by Nancy1340 » Fri Aug 01, 2014 1:12 am

The rat bike is Daddy Rat's bike. He own's/owned The Rat Hole
bar in Daytona FL IIRC.
TacAir wrote:Image

Rosie?


Image

Or this one.

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Re: The Lottery -- more MOAR up. 7/16

Post by vthunter » Mon Aug 11, 2014 4:53 pm

MOAR, TacAir?

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Re: The Lottery -- more MOAR up. 7/16

Post by jdavidboyd » Tue Aug 12, 2014 6:59 am

We should do what Jerry D. Young does on his site, I think it is, where you have a thread for the story, and a thread for comments on the story.

That way you don't get all excited when you see a new post, thinking the story has been updated, and instead it is just a comment or someone asking for more.

I though I had five new bits of story to read on 5 different threads this morning, but they were all comments by people asking for more.

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Re: The Lottery -- more MOAR up. 7/16

Post by TacAir » Fri Aug 15, 2014 3:56 pm

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Re: The Lottery -- more MOAR up. 7/16

Post by TacAir » Fri Aug 15, 2014 3:59 pm

jdavidboyd wrote:We should do what Jerry D. Young does on his site, I think it is, where you have a thread for the story, and a thread for comments on the story.

That way you don't get all excited when you see a new post, thinking the story has been updated, and instead it is just a comment or someone asking for more.

I though I had five new bits of story to read on 5 different threads this morning, but they were all comments by people asking for more.

Dave
If you look at all my threads, I put the date of the latest new material. We tried the dual thread thing - didn't work because folks will posted posted comments to the main thread.

Thanks for reading along.
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Re: The Lottery -- New MOAR now up 8/15

Post by DAVE KI » Fri Aug 15, 2014 5:40 pm

Great update and waiting for many many more.lol. Good to see you back.
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Re: The Lottery -- New MOAR now up 8/15

Post by 91Eunozs » Fri Aug 15, 2014 7:06 pm

Great update! Thanks...
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Re: The Lottery -- New MOAR now up 8/15

Post by FlashDaddy » Sat Aug 16, 2014 7:51 am

Thanks for the great update!
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Re: The Lottery -- more MOAR up. 7/16

Post by jdavidboyd » Sat Aug 16, 2014 11:11 am

TacAir wrote: If you look at all my threads, I put the date of the latest new material. We tried the dual thread thing - didn't work because folks will posted posted comments to the main thread.

Thanks for reading along.
Oh yeah, great idea! Now I can tell if an update is real, or just comments.

Great story.
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Re: The Lottery -- New MOAR now up 8/15

Post by vthunter » Sat Aug 16, 2014 1:55 pm

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Sweet update, TacAir!! Hope the painting went well and glad to have ya back in the saddle again.....knowing that was a teaser - hoping for more when ya can :words: :words: :mrgreen:

THANKS!!!

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Re: The Lottery -- New MOAR now up 8/15

Post by TacAir » Sat Aug 16, 2014 3:42 pm

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Re: The Lottery -- More MOAR now up 8/16

Post by DAVE KI » Sat Aug 16, 2014 4:42 pm

Fun! Fun? Sounds like it is going to get 100% awesome. I mean more awesomer than already.
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Re: The Lottery -- More MOAR now up 8/16

Post by 91Eunozs » Sat Aug 16, 2014 11:42 pm

Great entry! Something about this one just...flows.

Fun to read for sure...
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Re: The Lottery -- More MOAR now up 8/16

Post by TacAir » Sun Aug 17, 2014 3:36 pm

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Re: The Lottery -- shorter update 8/17 now up

Post by airdrop » Sun Aug 17, 2014 8:57 pm

:clap: Keeps getting better bud , MOAR would be nice .

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Re: The Lottery -- shorter update 8/17 now up

Post by Spazzy » Mon Aug 18, 2014 6:53 am

Three updates since I last checked in! Very nice, thanks!
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Re: The Lottery -- shorter update 8/17 now up

Post by Halfapint » Mon Aug 18, 2014 4:14 pm

leave for a few days and come back to all this! WOOHOO!!!!
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