Zombie Squad

It's been a month TB, how about some MOAR!?!?!?!?

Hurray!!!!!

Are your toes healed up enough for you to type?

Hell yeah!!!!!!

I just checked in, saw you posted and was like "Hell yeah! An update!" Boy was I let down. I've done that with the plywood, luckily with good boots on but it still sucked, hope your feet heal up and you can focus on important stuff, like this story.

Towanda wrote:I'm not going to argue with you.

Sent via carrier wave.

I don't think I'm being argumentative, just thinking my thoughts out loud.

Gladstone didn't want to shoot Hyacinth. She was in the line of fire. Sent via carrier wave. If Gladstone had the time to get the drop on Redhouse, he had a half second to move over a couple feet and shoot him in the back of the head. The way I'm reading it, by him telling Hya to come to him it put...

Gladstone is still thinking like a cop, he should've just shot his ass. Hopefully he moved his foot enough that Rory gets to put a bullet in his guts.

Your cliffhangers suck but this one REALLY sucks.

DAVE KI wrote:WTF Hunt4lyf? Thought there was moar story. But only disappointment.Kinda LOL.

At least it wasn't me being disappointed this time.

idahobob wrote:Typical Doc.

Bob
III

Yeah...

WTF Doc? Almost a month and no updates? Utteraly unacceptable.

Dear God! 2 updates at once!!! Hell yes!!! Thank you!!!

Another cliffhanger though??? You suck

This sucks

doc66 wrote:

rednekrampager wrote:Great story .. What's Jack Roy's last name?

I have no clue.

Seriously. All he's ever told me was Jack Roy.

Really Doc? Twice in the same day I saw you posted and twice I was let down. You officially SUCK!!!

Damn Doc!!! You're on a roll, I like it.

Thanks!!! I'm curious to see the new dynamic with the larger group.

I finally finished part 1. Tinderbox, I don't know how to say this without sounding like I am a brown-noser or full of crap, but this is the best story I have read in recent years (probably ever, actually, and I am a book-aholic and a tough critic). I am absolutely appalled that you haven't been pi...

I'm glad to see they're moving out, looking forward to MOAR soon!!!

91Eunozs wrote:

Hunt4lyf wrote:...The humvee, the 240B, the spare M16, Mundy's M16 and all the ammo need to be hidden. What the clowns in the fort don't know, can't CAN hurt them.

FTFY

HA! I see what you did there (took me a second though)

doc66 wrote:Yeah, I'm late. Sorry, it's been a hell of a week. Things should pick up here now.

No worries bro.

I translated what they Mexican kid was saying, I kinda feel bad for him but at least Mundy left him some ammo. If I were Mundy, I'd figure out a way to conceal the humvee not too far away and ride the rest of the way back to the compound in the step van. This. The humvee, the 240B, the spare M16, Mu...

Hell yeah!!! To short, much to short, I really, really want to read this whole thing all at once. Thanks TB. I figured Mundy would have thrown the kid a couple MRE's at least. It looks like Kern is starting to loose it a bit and I could see Mundy using one of those rockets to breach the fort to get...

Hell yeah!!! To short, much to short, I really, really want to read this whole thing all at once. Thanks TB. I figured Mundy would have thrown the kid a couple MRE's at least. It looks like Kern is starting to loose it a bit and I could see Mundy using one of those rockets to breach the fort to get ...

doc66 wrote:Monday. I promise.

It's Wednesday.

How is she also going to explain the gun nobody knew she had? Redhouse is bound to tell someone. I believe it'll be an instance of "you don't tell and I won't tell." If he opens his mouth about the pistol then she's gonna tell about his foiled attack on her. At the least he would be banished from t...