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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby gart43 » Fri Jun 13, 2008 7:23 pm

doc66 wrote:I'll get something up next week....


You'd better, or I'm gonna ask TB where your house is and drive half-way across the US and make you write us something.

I'm not kidding, i'm looking at my car right now contemplating it.








:lol:

Seriously.
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby SimonZayne » Sat Jun 14, 2008 1:44 am

I've been there but I couldn't get back. Its a maze of secret paths and booby traps. Kinda like that Indiana Jones movie but worse.
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby gart43 » Sat Jun 14, 2008 4:57 pm

SimonZayne wrote:I've been there but I couldn't get back. Its a maze of secret paths and booby traps. Kinda like that Indiana Jones movie but worse.


Does it also have a giant rolling boulder?
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby Beanhead » Sat Jun 14, 2008 11:33 pm

gart43 wrote:
SimonZayne wrote:I've been there but I couldn't get back. Its a maze of secret paths and booby traps. Kinda like that Indiana Jones movie but worse.


Does it also have a giant rolling boulder?

Probably, and nazis too.
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby Shorty0969 » Mon Jun 16, 2008 9:05 am

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gart43 wrote:
SimonZayne wrote:I've been there but I couldn't get back. Its a maze of secret paths and booby traps. Kinda like that Indiana Jones movie but worse.


Does it also have a giant rolling boulder?

Probably, and nazis too.


No, just Shorty. She's worse than all that.
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby doc66 » Mon Jun 16, 2008 9:20 am

Shorty0969 wrote:No, just Shorty. She's worse than all that.


Yeah... what do you do with a woman who has her own firearms and is always bugging you to go shooting?

It's a sick thing.

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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby Ahkaine » Mon Jun 16, 2008 12:27 pm

doc66 wrote:Yeah... what do you do with a woman who has her own firearms and is always bugging you to go shooting?


Marry her before she gets away!
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby Shoe Daddy » Mon Jun 23, 2008 4:54 pm

It's been a week............I am dying a little inside each day. These stories are worse than crack....
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby gart43 » Sat Jun 28, 2008 3:28 am

MOAR :?:

You make me so :cry: .

But your writing is great, I'm gonna be first in line when they get published, then when your old and famous I'll show my grandkids your origibal works :D.
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby Ronin71XS » Sat Jun 28, 2008 8:07 am

Dude, me want MOAR! :mrgreen:


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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby jclaudii » Thu Jul 03, 2008 3:31 pm

Doc, wife and I are waiting for the next installment! I've read all the stories once already in the past, but now I have been reading them to my wife as bedtime stories. She loves them! It helps her relax from a day of being pregnant. You have great skill in your stories that let us become attached to the characters.

Hopefully we'll continue with Pat eventually. Have a good 4th of July Weekend.
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby Name » Fri Jul 04, 2008 11:12 am

:cry: moar?
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby gart43 » Fri Jul 04, 2008 4:33 pm

jclaudii wrote:Doc, wife and I are waiting for the next installment! I've read all the stories once already in the past, but now I have been reading them to my wife as bedtime stories. She loves them! It helps her relax from a day of being pregnant. You have great skill in your stories that let us become attached to the characters.

Hopefully we'll continue with Pat eventually. Have a good 4th of July Weekend.


Man your wife must be really screw up if zombies getting their head blown in helps her relax................just messing.

Sounds like a cool chick. 8)
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby Beanhead » Wed Jul 09, 2008 10:21 pm

BBLLLLAAAAAAAARRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!! *Bangs fist on desk, pants heavily*

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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby gart43 » Thu Jul 10, 2008 1:47 am

See he's like a crack dealer, he knows we won't want it as much if we're getting daily/weekly doses, so he's holding out on us 'til we're getting really weirded out, than he'll make his move and relieve us.

I hope to god he will anyway.
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby Beanhead » Fri Jul 11, 2008 7:55 pm

gart43 wrote:See he's like a crack dealer, he knows we won't want it as much if we're getting daily/weekly doses, so he's holding out on us 'til we're getting really weirded out, than he'll make his move and relieve us.

I hope to god he will anyway.


Crack is MUCH easier to get than are updates from doc66, and coincidently, if he doesn't start posting soon, Im going to need some crack.
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby doc66 » Fri Jul 11, 2008 10:42 pm

Doc says, he's writing the next part even now....

It'll be up soon.

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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby Shoe Daddy » Tue Jul 15, 2008 5:36 pm

Oh thank you god, my prayers were heard and I can finally have some more of this truly wonderful story!!!

Hmmm....that sounded needy and completely retarded. How about, thank god! Glad to see it.
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby doc66 » Tue Jul 15, 2008 8:24 pm

Okay, I admit it, I'm kinda stuck, I'm about half way through the next installment and I'm struggling. Too much else going on, with moving and such. I'll have something for you all though. It's just taking a bit.
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby Shoe Daddy » Wed Jul 16, 2008 3:21 pm

Doc, take as much time as you need to do this. I was just giving you shit last post. I would rather you take the time and do the story correctly rather than rush through it and have it suck. You have done something truly incredible with these stories: you have caught the readers attention, and that is not easily accomplished. Promise me this though, if you get these things published, can I please have your autograph? :mrgreen:
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby Shoe Daddy » Sun Aug 03, 2008 12:55 am

hmm....down to the middle of the page. TOO FAR!!! BUMP
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby Slug » Tue Aug 12, 2008 11:28 am

Man, I just read all this and I have to say...... You may be getting a call from my employer about my lack of work...


Great stuff man.
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby gart43 » Mon Aug 18, 2008 12:58 am

#1 Doc, get working on this, NOW. :lol:




Seriously, I'm freaking out.

Slug wrote:Man, I just read all this and I have to say...... You may be getting a call from my employer about my lack of work...


Great stuff man.


#2 I know that feeling :P

#3 Slug is that a Gerber hatchet I spy in your avatar??!?

I so need one of thsoe :D.
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Re: Cole; More on a Story

Postby Slug » Mon Aug 18, 2008 11:17 am

Indeed it is, and yes. you need one.

Ill never go into the field without one now. even as small as the hatchet it, it makes short work out of almost anything.
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