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High Ground: House of Adair

Postby dogbane » Thu Aug 02, 2012 1:03 pm

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Prologue

It is a large hill—or a small mountain—separated from its parent limestone ridgeline by a creek that runs north and then west across ancient terraces to the river that flows down the great valley, prehistoric floodplains now blanketed with a quilt of subdivisions, food joints, office parks, old mills, newer factories, and ubiquitous warehouses, floodplains now threaded with boulevards and highways, freeways and offramps, stitched together with wires, wires and more wires on poles, poles and more poles.

The large hill—or small mountain—is forested on its steep slopes with fine oaks and hickories, tulip poplars, sweet gums, and dogwoods. It is more or less flat on top, and on its pinnacle sits a little township, with its own grocery, post office, diner, firehouse, and water tower. The slopes are steep-shouldered and bouldered. A paved serpentine road leads up the east side from the creekbottom to the hilltop, and is the only ingress or egress for vehicles.

The road levels out and to the right is the post office, to the left the firehouse, next to that the diner, and the grocery across the street. Lining the street beyond on both sides were homes of various sizes and shapes—Arts & Craft bungalows, Tudors, California Spanish Revival, the odd Victorian gingerbread and even a few modest cottages and a single split-level brick ranch. Their back yards walk up to the bluffs to overlook the river valley to the north and south, and at one time, the nighttime view from the patios and decks was of a carpet of glittering diamond streetlights and houselights, with neon rubies, sapphires, and citrines.

On the west end of the street, facing east with a view of the length of the avenue, is a large, rambling Art Deco mansion, stuccoed and roofed with an unusual green glazed ceramic tile. Within the rambling structure are enclosed courtyards and rooftop verandas. Descending the western bluff from an iron gate in the back wall is a stone stair, nearly hidden by English ivy, Virginia creeper, and poison ivy, leading down to a spring near the bottom that feeds a stream that leads to the creek.

The township has no school, for the children—when there were children—attended the private academy; there was no church, for the faithful—when there were faithful—attended the big moneyed church downtown, a downtown whose glass and steel edifices are yet visible from this hilltop during the daylight hours.

If you were to stand now, well after sunset, on the upper veranda of the mansion—once the home of a textile king—under the green tile eaves and face west toward the river at night, you would see no neon jewels. You would see no glowing skyscrapers or white steeples. You would see only black velvet, perhaps mist rising from the pearlescent river, and the silhouette of the plateau marking the western boundary of the river valley.

You would hear no horns or sirens, no susurration of cars on the highways sounding like water flowing over rocks. You would hear, perhaps, the sound of the waterfall at the plunge pool down at the creek. You would hear tree frogs, crickets, and katydids; owls of the barred and screech variety, and whippoorwills; the tittering of bats; and the mewling of cats.

You would most certainly hear the cats.

[Title edit to reflect that this is Part I of a planned series.]
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Re: High Ground - fiction

Postby dogbane » Thu Aug 02, 2012 2:55 pm

Chapter 1

James Adair contemplated the large chain link double gate—topped with concertina wire—that stood before him at the end of the bridge that crossed the creek that once bore his surname on maps. Beyond the gate, the road snaked up the hillside. Two stone pillars marked the start of the grade and inscribed in a sandstone plaque set into one pillar were the words: Adair Community. The other pillar read: 1920.

The sign on the gate read: COUNTY PROPERTY: NO TRESPASSING. There was a heavy chain and padlock binding the gates tightly together.

Can’t get there from here, he thought, and the old tune began to play in his mind: When the world is a monster that swallows you whole/Kick the clay that holds the teeth in...

James started down the creekbank and followed the perimeter fence—also chain-link and topped with razor wire—around the base of the hill to the north, looking up at the boulder-strewn slope. I've been there, I know the way (Can't get there from here). I've been there, I know the way (Can't get there from here). His footsteps fell in the leaf litter in time with the song.

Then he stopped and chastised himself. Falling into patterns has consequences. The songs in his head reduced him to a human metronome, an unaware mechanism tapping out time. He wouldn’t see the copperhead that might lie across his path, the stumphole that might break his ankle, or the lurching anthropoid figure approaching him, askew, beyond a tangle of grape vines on the far side of the creek.

James unslung his carbine, and dropped to one knee. He raised the monocular that hung from a cord around his neck and peered at the figure.

Magnified, the face he saw was a horror. It had been a man in his 40s or 50s, judging from his salt and pepper hair. His eyes were milky and his mouth was a gaping raw hole with broken teeth and a swollen, liver-colored tongue. His head swayed on a corded neck with shreds of flesh hanging like moulting feathers over the collar of a tattered shirt black with fluids and caked with dried mud.

James watched the man pause and lift his head and appear to sniff the air, taste the air, panting. The man uttered a breathy bark: Huh! He stepped forward into the tangle of grapevines and tripped, falling forward. His torso landed on a large, twisting vine which caught him, his feet flipping up and catching in a snarl of greenbriar that snagged his ragged trousers. He raged—Huh! Huh! Huh Huh!—kicking his feet like a fly in a web, struggling, only to be further ensnared. For the first time, the man seemed to look straight at James with an expression of forlorn madness.

James stood and reslung his carbine. He resumed his steps following the fence, with one eye on the ragged man, whose gaze followed him as he walked away.

Huh! Huh! Huh! Huh! Beyond the tangle and thicket along the creek, James saw the park, its ballfields grown high with Queen Anne’s Lace, pigweed, and blackberry briars. Parting the weeds like a team of ghosts, more human figures slowly walked toward the creek. No more music played in his head, only the skin drum of his heart in his ears
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[edited for clumsy, hasty prose in the antepenultimate paragraph]
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Re: High Ground - fiction

Postby DTyra » Thu Aug 02, 2012 5:29 pm

Interesting and descriptive, will there be more?
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Re: High Ground - fiction

Postby dogbane » Thu Aug 02, 2012 6:12 pm

DTyra wrote:Interesting and descriptive, will there be more?

Thank you, and I hope so. I want James under a roof before nightfall.
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Postby Mr. E. Monkey » Thu Aug 02, 2012 7:51 pm

Sounds interesting. I do like the vivid imagery. :)
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Re: High Ground - fiction

Postby dogbane » Thu Aug 02, 2012 9:13 pm

With the sound of yelps and moans diminishing behind him, James crept quickly west, keeping low, the high chain link fence and rocky bluff to his left, the creek to his right. The ground fell away before him as he approached the fall line. The stream was rushing noisily over rocks now, and he could hear the low growl of the waterfall ahead. The sun was lowering in the southwest and he was in deep shade for now, wading through a knee-high forest of lush, green poison ivy with leaves as big as his face.

Ahead, he could see the gold-green light of foliage illuminated by the sun, and he could see the outline of the bluff against the sky through the trees, and he knew he would reach his goal soon. The falls were louder and he no longer heard the mournful cries of hungry humanoids behind him. The ground became rocky and he found himself on a precipice about twenty feet high. The creek spilled frothily over the lip of a large, flat rock and plunged into a pool below. Turning slowly in the pool was a rotting human figure, face-down. James looked at it for a long moment, then he abruptly turned left to follow the fence’s course, walking quickly into the sunlight below the western face of the bluff.

He walked the edge of a sandstone ledge, looking down at the soft green carpet of poison ivy growing twenty feet below. Beyond it, a small stream flowed north toward the creek. He walked parallel to it, and as he progressed upstream, it drew closer to him. The ledge inclined, then came to a dead end at a grotto, where the small stream trickled from the bluff face from a source hidden of a riot of green. The high chain link fence continued on, its galvanized posts set with concrete into holes drilled into the rock, crossing the ledge path and blocking his way to the grotto. He stood facing the fence with his hands on his hips. He could go no further on this path.

More poison ivy, he thought, considering the scene on the other side of the fence.

He wished he could just cut the fence, but even if he had the tools, he wouldn’t do that.

Don’t break what you have, he thought. Build on it.

He bent and gripped the bottom of the fence and tugged it, testing its give. It was pretty tight.

He looked where the water trickled out and saw that there was a gap between the fence and the stone, though it was filled with flowing water and choked with poison ivy. There was some wobble to the wire there.

He could squeeze under it. But not with all my gear. And then there’s that PI.

James leaned his rifle against the fence, set his shell bag next to it and unshouldered his backpack. He picked up his shell bag sat on the rock ledge, reached in the bag and took out a pouch of leaf chewing tobacco, pulled out a wad and tucked it in his cheek. His feet dangled off the rock ledge and he pondered the fence problem.

While James sat there, looking out over the wooded hollow that turned into a privacy-fence subdivision a few hundred yards to the west, he noticed movement among the trees beyond the stream—a mix of dense pine and cedar, with a rusty carpet of needles and very little undergrowth. A humanoid figure staggered like a drunk, bouncing from tree to tree, snagging its tatters on cedar sticks and being spun this way and that like a shitfaced square dancer. Finally it cleared the evergreens and paused in the forest of beeches and gums among the big sycamore and poplar trees. It raised its milky eyes and saw James. It cried out in a rasp and loped toward him. James got up quickly, reaching for his rifle.

When it reached the stream, the humanoid slipped on a mossy rock. Its head struck a large stone in the stream and split like a melon, the contents of the skull fouling the stream. The humanoid twitched and rasped for a moment, then lay still. James laughed aloud in spite of himself. Another bullet saved for a rainy day, he thought.

Now to get through that fence.
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Re: High Ground

Postby dogbane » Thu Aug 02, 2012 11:51 pm

On the fence hung a sign: NO ROCK CLIMBING.

James saw tags on the cliff face above him. Somebody had been climbing, he thought. Could have been before the fence was put up. Still….

He put on his pack and slung his gun and bag and stepped across the trickle and held onto the fence, edging his way onto the diminishing ledge until he had to reach for a toehold. Using the fence for handholds and rocks for toeholds, he scuttled around the promontory twenty feet above the ground. Around the curve of the rock face was another ledge, and the fence was high enough from the ledge and far enough from the cliff face for him to crawl under and climb.

The rock face was tagged with spray paint here, too. Thank you, brothers, may you rest in peace.

James clipped his pack to the bottom of the fence with a carabiner and crawled under the links, unclipping and dragging the pack behind him. He looked up at the rock and saw that there were a number of good handholds, but he couldn’t climb it with the pack on his back. It would be a tight squeeze past the razor wire, too.

A long length of nylon cord fastened to his pack—to which was strapped his shell bag and rifle—and looped through the carabiner on his belt, James ascended the rock face.

And the music in his head began. We gotta get to a higher place and I hope we all arrive together. We gotta get to a higher place if we’re gonna survive the we-eather. He had a song in his head for most occasions, whether he wanted one or not. It was a gift from his parents, for whom everything reminded them of some song.

Halfway up, he reached the top of the fence, with its ferocious coil of razor wire. He hugged the wall as he stretched for his next handhold, avoiding the cutting edges and barbs. He had nearly cleared the wire when his right trouser leg raked the wire and nearly snagged, pulling his center of gravity just far enough away from the wall for him to panic, but his grip held and his balance steadied. His heart raced for a minute as he clung, still, to the wall, his hands slippery with sweat, mosquitoes droning around his ears.

He heaved himself over the edge at the top after the five-yard climb. He rested on a pale green lichen-encrusted boulder thirty-five feet above the ground, a gray nylon cord trailing out of sight below. He could see over the evergreens to the rooftops of the neighborhood nearby: rolling hills of red, green, gray and brown asphalt shingles. James reckoned the sun was two hours from setting.

He found good purchase and began to reel in the line.
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Re: High Ground

Postby dogbane » Fri Aug 03, 2012 10:26 am

Any questions or confusions so far?

Our protagonist has been a lucky fellow. I wonder how long his luck will hold out.
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Postby wee drop o' bush » Fri Aug 03, 2012 11:50 am

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Postby dogbane » Fri Aug 03, 2012 12:12 pm

Jimmy dashed through the great foyer, yelling. He loved the way his voice echoed off the arched ceiling. He loved the sunlight filtering through the green glass skylight onto the strangely patterned tile floor. His grandmother shushed him harshly from the dim parlor to the right of the entrance.

You’ll wake your Pop-Pop! she hissed.

Pop-Pop, Jimmy’s great-grandfather, was old as dirt, his mother said. Jimmy didn’t know how old dirt was, as he seemed to find fresh dirt daily, but he accepted that it meant Pop-Pop was really, really old—older than this big old house, which Pop-Pop had built according to his own design way back when.

Jimmy was curious as to whether his yelling did in fact wake Pop-Pop, who slept all the time, and who always smelled kinda funny, but who always uttered mysterious sentences to him that sounded like magic spells.

(Jimmy, it takes a stronger man to build something than to break something.)

Jimmy crept quietly up the stairs and down a hallway to the room where they kept Pop-Pop, with its big arched windows overlooking the city. It was the library, but it had an electric lift from the kitchen that had been designed to carry heavy furniture and crates, and which was perfect for Pop-Pop’s wheelchair, so they moved his great bed into the library, and he lived his remaining days among his books and his view of the city, the river, the now-idle mill. Jimmy peered through the slightly open door to the room. Pop-Pop’s eyes were closed.

Jimmy pushed the door open and tip-toed into the room. Pop-Pop’s head turned toward him, but his eyes didn’t open. Jimmy froze, then slowly lowered himself to his hands and knees to the polished wood floor. He spied a wooden box under the big bed. He started to crawl toward the bed.

Jimmy! He froze again. Pop-Pop’s eyes were open, icy blue, looking at Jimmy.

Jimmy, Pop-Pop whispered, was my name, too. A deep breath, eyes fixed on Jimmy, still on his hands and knees. I was Jimmy as a boy. But then I grew up and everyone called me Mr. James. I want to be Jimmy again. Come here, son.

Jimmy stood up and walked tentatively to the bed.

Jimmy, you want to see what’s in that box under the bed? Get it out for me.

Jimmy slid the box from under the bed. It was painted green with pale lilies and a woman in a long white dress and long curly hair that grew into flowers. Pop-Pop said, It’s Art Noo Vo, as if that answered Jimmy’s quizzical expression. Pop-Pop opened the box with trembling and uncertain fingers.

Inside were old photographs of young people who were old now, or dead, and letters, a pair of rings, a bone-handled folding knife (Jimmy wanted that!), and other mementos. Pop-Pop’s fingers found a string and he drew it out of the box. On the end was a brass key.

Jimmy, this is my house. And someday this will be your house. Right now, I’m giving you this key, so you will always be welcome in your house. It will open every door, and it’s the only one that will open the secret doors. It's called a "master key."

Secret doors! Jimmy was excited. Where are the secret doors, Pop-Pop?

I named your grandfather Andrew, after his mother’s father, because I am not a vain man. He named your father Martin, god knows why. Martin named you James, after me. You are James the Second. This is your house, now, Jimmy.

But where are the secret doors?

There are a few. I’ll show you one right now. See that part of the wall over there between the two bookcases? See those carved designs? The one on the right turns up to show a keyhole.

Jimmy went to the panel and found the keyhole. He put the key in and opened the panel to reveal a shallow closet full of shelves, the shelves full of boxes and ledgers.

Put this box away in there, Jimmy.

Jimmy placed the box on an empty spot on a shelf.

Shut the door and lock it. Jimmy did so.

This will be—Pop-Pop paused, looked him in the eye and held his hand out. Jimmy took his hand, which was very cool to the touch. This will be our secret, hm? Jimmy nodded. Pop-Pop shook his hand slowly three times, then patted him gently on the head like a pup.

Pop-Pop died early the next morning. Jimmy was the only one who cried.
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Postby wee drop o' bush » Fri Aug 03, 2012 2:03 pm

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Re: High Ground

Postby dogbane » Fri Aug 03, 2012 2:58 pm

Here is a crappy map to give an idea of how this place is laid out:
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Concentric lines are contours. The red line is the fence. The OD line is the fall line.
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Re: High Ground

Postby DTyra » Fri Aug 03, 2012 4:45 pm

I guess Little Jimmy and James Adair are one and the same...I hope he held on to Pop-Pop's master key.
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Re: High Ground

Postby maldon007 » Fri Aug 03, 2012 7:42 pm

A story with maps? ...I'm in.




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Re: High Ground

Postby Nancy1340 » Fri Aug 03, 2012 7:45 pm

Really good. Thank you.
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Re: High Ground

Postby dogbane » Fri Aug 03, 2012 7:58 pm

The pack spun and swung on the end of the nylon cord. James could not see it without getting so close to the edge that he feared losing his balance. So he pulled it steadily and slowly to reduce movement. Every time it resisted, he was afraid it had snagged on the fence, that the cord would be cut and his pack and bag and gun would be four stories below him. But finally, he dragged the pack up over the rock, hefted it onto his back and clambered up the rocky slope.

Above the grotto and spring, the poison ivy thinned out and was replaced by grasses and wildflowers, and the occasional clump of lilies or fading irises. In a cleft in the rock, he found the cut staircase he sought. A stonecutter had made these; they were no natural rock formation. There was an occasional lily carved into the stone, and more frequent scribbles of spray paint.

James ascended the steps easily, though the going was steep. He stopped partway up to look out over the treetops. The sun was not far from setting over the plateau. Golden light glittered on the serpentine river. The glass spires of downtown reflected blades of sunlight, and the vast sprawl of the city was glowing yellow ochre. He saw no threads of smoke drawn skyward from any cookfires. He heard nothing but the crows in the treetops and the crickets in the grass.

At the top of the stair was an iron gate with lilies wrought into the bars so tightly that no hand could pass through. The plastered wall was ten feet high with a green tiled eave. Visible through the gate was a courtyard filled with high weeds. There were no windows in this wall, which ran the entire length of the great house that rose up behind it.

The gate looked strong, but violent marks near the fine brass lock betrayed past—unsuccessful—attempts at entry.

James pulled a cord from within his shirtcollar, withdrawing a brass key.

He took a pencil from his bag and scribbled all over the key and scraped the lead with the key edge until the key was coated with pencil dust. He slid the key into the lock with a rapid series of smooth ticks. He turned gently clockwise. It wouldn’t budge. He gingerly turned the key counter and it rolled smoothly over. With a click and a clank the heavy bolt slid out. The gate swung outward.

This is your house now, Jimmy.
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Re: High Ground

Postby dogbane » Fri Aug 03, 2012 8:10 pm

To give an idea of how I imagine this house:

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Re: High Ground

Postby maldon007 » Fri Aug 03, 2012 8:59 pm

This is the house from Jimmy's childhood?
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Re: High Ground

Postby dogbane » Fri Aug 03, 2012 9:19 pm

maldon007 wrote:This is the house from Jimmy's childhood?

Yes, this is the one where his great-grandfather died, from the flashback scene.

maldon007 wrote:A story with maps? ...I'm in.




(you get all crazy with it, like I do :lol: )

I'll try to restrain myself. :lol: I want the words to tell the pictures, but I also want to share what I see in more visual ways. I also want to leave some things vague so people will project what they want. For example, I don't specify his weapon besides "rifle" and "carbine".

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Thank you!

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As you can see... :)
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Re: High Ground

Postby dogbane » Fri Aug 03, 2012 9:58 pm

The courtyard was illuminated by the walls of the house, which reflected the sunset in mellow amber. The weeds grew chest-high and bulbous yellow and black orb spiders spun broad nets with zig-zag patterns woven. Old glazed ceramic urns and pedestals lay consumed by morning glory vines. James crossed the courtyard and turned at an opening in the right-hand side of the enclosure.

He walked down a wide greenhouse hall with a green glass roof. Three closed doors lined the right-hand side, with benches intended for potted plants placed between each door. The left wall was blank save for a faded trompe l'oeil, and at the end of the hall a heavy oak and iron door. James rubbed more graphite on the key. It slid into the lock and the same ancestral magic that had opened the gate opened the door. It swung inward into India ink.

A deep, mellow odor wafted from the room. James hesitated. He pulled his 4-AA Maglite from his bag and clicked it on. Hundreds of dull glinting eyes flashed back at him and he startled. His eyes adjusted. It was his flashlight reflecting off of dozens—no, hundreds—of dusty wine bottles. He stepped in and swept the room with light.

Sweet cheeses! They never found the wine cellar! Or, he thought, they never found the key. Heck! They might never have even found the door!

There were casks of whiskey and bourbon, too. Thirty years—or more—this stuff has been sitting here!

James had been sober three years, seven months and twenty-one days. It had been a good run.
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Re: High Ground

Postby dumb blonde » Sat Aug 04, 2012 1:20 am

I'm enjoying this, Moar Please :clap:
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Re: High Ground

Postby by-the-throat » Sat Aug 04, 2012 3:49 am

All right, I'm in.

You can really lay it on with the imagery; I have been enjoying your descriptions of the setting.
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