Zombie Squad

Ego is overrated. Expect a PM in coming time.

Sorry I haven't been on here for some time. I have a life outside of the internet that I enjoy greatly. I would argue that Shaun of the Dead has an inner emotional story. Here it is. Shaun and Liz break up. All is lost for Shaun. What is he to do? The McGuffin or the zombie then enters the plot. The...

Yeah provide examples. Or we can discuss the facets of McGuffin zombies in fiction. Either way works.

Well, movies do come from scripts, and scripts are a piece of writing. Thus, we can look into short fiction and novels as well.

Thoughts and feelings anyone? I don't see it happening in many writings. Shaun of the Dead can be one exception but I'm sure there can be some argument to that. Personally, I love it when a film script or book or short story makes zombies into a McGuffin.

Lord of the Flies without the children? Sounds interesting. I always hated those kids...

You have a good review or short synopsis of it?

Constructive criticism by PM or on here?

Good luck.

Ever thought of posting a project on Kickstarter?

With your permission I wrote down some critiques: Chapter 1 -the road, had / Take out the comma. I personally don't think it is necessary. -I think we had better be ready with more than just myself tonight. / I feel like this sentence is awkward. I had to re-read it several times to understand what ...

Good stuff. Did Aubrey De Grey have an influence on the author by any chance?

Mudinyeri,

I just wanted to say thank you for allowing criticism on your board. I would love more than anything critique to your work because it sounds like you have an awesome story that will excite me if I read it. Good luck on your writing.

I'm confused?

I second The War of The Worlds. H.G. Wells had his stuff together (except for enjoying Stalin, eugenics, etc.).

I want everyone to succeed, including Joe_Ton and you Manliest.

I agree with everything TacAir said.

Like DTyra said, if you want critique, message me with your blessing and I'll PM my thoughts.

Seriously though, do you accept screenplays?

I'm more green than sea-weed.

Ok, I'll play ball. Do you accept screenplays, visa, or mastercard?

Your right. Looking back now I would have done things differently. I assumed people would be welcome to the idea of someone critiquing their writings but I was wrong. At this point, the only thing I can offer on this forum is my editing skills and I know for a fact no one will want their writings ed...

In my mind, what I don't understand is why should anyone feel embarrassed about receiving criticism on an open public forum where all users by choice can become anonymous? That being said, I understand now that people can take offense to criticism. I never meant to attack any person's character when...

I'm sorry for anything I did. I won't post on this forum ever again. I'm not welcome here. I wish this could have ended a better way. Anger is not cool and this is all negative, on both ends. Moderators, if you want delete this thread.

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